Waiting For The Little Things

I waited,

And waited.

It was the little things you did to me...

...won me over.

I don't wanna break this...

...I wanna make this.

Don't just leave me....

hang'n on to the all the little things.

Told you to take your time...

....But don't just leave me.

You left me....

....with all the little things...

...and too much time unreplaceable.

I waited,

and waited.

You left me hang'n...

...with all but the little things.





Poetry by Valerie
Read 1160 times
Written on 2007-11-22 at 23:53

dott Save as a bookmark (requires login)
dott Write a comment (requires login)
dott Send as email (requires login)
dott Print text


Phyllis J. Rhodes
What an emotional story you've told here. It goes straight to the heart. Be careful with your sweetie, it is so precious.
2007-11-26


Kathy Lockhart
oh Valerie, this is a powerful piece. In so few words you have evoked such a deep emotional response. This one has pain written all through.
2007-11-23