A feeling of loneliness while away from home.


loneliness.

The feeling is almost like a living thing,
too strong to describe in words,
its like seeing real things moving,
your heart wrenches with the pain of despair.
It is too real to you, like a running stream of water,
too real and yet distant, like a star in the black skies,
engulfing the body like a warm sensation, deep down in the body.
As soon as you get home, you take a sigh of relief as though a burden has been lifted from your shoulders, what an exprience of melancholy, lightly lifted, all from the loneliness.




Poetry by martin pande
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Written on 2007-09-11 at 12:35

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M Heathcote
Thats very good Martin I like it a lot,

too real and yet distant, like a star in the black skies,

great line! mate :)
2007-09-28


Amanda K
you used strong words to express the feeling. a very good work.


best regards,
2007-09-11