I split my shadow in the morning (Lay the lion down)



I split my shadow in the morning

Glue it together in the evening

I eat my coffee like you drink your carpet

A split moment of different life

Dancing tears having a ball

Scratching the paint from a dead whores shoe

Ticking the surface

A ass kicking breath

Lay the lion down

Hear your sound

From silent steps

Shadow closing in

Where the hell is my glue







Poetry by Mr painter
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Written on 2008-11-12 at 09:02

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Janine>K
this is once again brilliant! Keep writing Mr. Talented. Looking forward to your next poem.
2008-11-13


Dan Cederholm
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Great poem my friend . . .

Look at the november sky
and made a Blue Blues
out of this . . .

*APPLAUDS*

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2008-11-12


J. E.
Wonderful, thumbs up!
2008-11-12



love the finale, a fun write with personality coming through, this one is flavoured with inspiration.
2008-11-12