Very interesting in its flow and use of imagery:
'burying of kisses,' 'stars burning on cheeks,'
'dancing roses,' and quite sad in the flow of tears.
Almost as if to say, comfort yourself or prepare to do so,
because in the end, no one else will. Tres triste. But reality is reality. Spoken without apology and without malice nor harsh words.

Language: 4
Format: 5
Mood: 5
Overall: 5
2011-05-01

countryfog
So brief yet so evocative . . . each stanza is a compelling image. I try but can't think of anyone to compare it to, which is perhaps the best comment one can make.
2011-04-08