Today I Saw A Hedghog.

Today I saw a Hedgehog
A funny looking thing
He crept across the lawn outside
As I sat watching him

He snuffled through the leaves and grass
His nose twitched like a snake
And then he stopped quite suddenly
As he came across a rake

At first he rolled into a ball
Quite comical to see
Then slowly poked his head out
And I'm sure he winked at me

Once more he turned toward the rake
Who's spines looked somewhat higher
And slowly moved toward it
With what looked to me, desire

First he nudged it with his nose
Then rubbed against the prongs
Then getting no reaction
Seemed to sense, theres something wrong

And then he tried to mount it
But that just came to grief
And shuffled off indignantly
Which came as some relief

And so I've learned a moral
From this Hedgehog in his teens
Things that we take for granted
Are not always as they seem.




Poetry by penfold18
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Written on 2006-02-01 at 12:06

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normalil
I enjoyed this so much. Very amusing, and a wise anecdote too.
2015-07-16


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
That was YOU on poemhunter,
I read this poem there yesterday.
I love it
the poor hedgehog
[is his name Sonic?]
Liz.
2006-02-02


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
I like your style it brought a smile.
2006-02-01


kip
...all i can give this is arating, the rest, the poem speaks for itself...its beautiful and creative too...
2006-02-01