white page

I choose not ot write

and keep this page white

not because the lack of words

but because the pain inside

pressing on my pen

drowing the sorrow

so i delete them all

i want you just remmeber

my lovely words to you





Poetry by Libyan Rose
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Written on 2012-04-06 at 23:10

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Libyan Rose
Thanks for reading . i meant ' lack' . it was wrong spelling
I think now the meaning is clear
2012-04-07


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Maybe thats the best time to write. I your use of the word ' lake'. I think that you may of ment to say ' like'. Please leave it has it is. Fore I think of '' the lake of words dammed. As if a dame made by a beaver. You and us your readers awaiting that beavers dame removed freeing your words. Fore us to read.
Ken D Williams
2012-04-07