pop gun

I had to leave

impatiently
before I met me









as you





Poetry by 5072
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Written on 2005-08-03 at 22:07

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Claire
the way this poem skips itself from lEAve to impatientLY to mE is dainty and sounds very natural, not at all forced -

i don't think i get it - but i like it and am envious of people who can write this economically
2005-08-05


Lisa Zaran
Absolutely exquisite.
2005-08-05