not sure if this is a sonnet, but I did follow the Shakesperean style of 14 lines abab cdcd efef gg. Or at least I think I did. Let me know.


Morning Sonnet

A pleasant breeze wafts
over meadows of purple clover
as the gossamer curtains
billow over me and my lover.
The sweet fragrance of morning
awakens our love's embrace.
My fingers trace his body
as his eager lips caress my face.
No words are ever spoken
as we move in harmony.
We dance to silent music
while our hearts compose a symphony.
Let's sing our song together.
Let's waltz to love forever!

Kathy Lockhart
5/5/06























Poetry by Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-05-05 at 16:25

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Pamela A Lamppa
I love a beautiful sonnet, and this did not disappoint. Excellent. SOOOO dreamy and romantic. I LOVED this one. ~Pam
2006-05-17


Christian Ward
Damn fine sonnet
2006-05-06


Jon Hanover
Very beautiful. I see more religious and personal material from you so it kind of stunned me at first. Glad I came back it keeps getting better each read. As for the rules on form, I am an " ink stained babarian " standing outside the gates of poetry. To me though it is a great write.
2006-05-06


lastromantichero
hey kathy it is bang on and so good rgds mike
2006-05-05


Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
well i did it again. wrote to myself again. Geesh! Can't take it away. might as well own up to it. lol
2006-05-05


Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
LOL Thank you Graham. Your opinon means a lot. : ) kathy
2006-05-05


penfold18
Who cares Kathy this is as romantic as it gets its beautiful.
2006-05-05