| Living in harmony (Haiku)
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2008-08-11
this left me feeling light as a feather and so free. This is a lovely haiku.
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| Would you like a cup of tea my dear?
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2008-08-11
I am dancing in my mind while I read this. It has a lovely rhythm and a beautiful uplifting message. Yes, Please I would love a cup of tea. : ) kathy
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| Another Face in the Crowd
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2008-08-11
Great text Damon. I always love reading your stories and poetry. I think both you and Caroline were blessed when you chose that face in the crowd. : ) kathy
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| Black magnet (song)
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2008-08-08
This is a wonderful poem/song. I love the truth of it, the flow, and the message. applause and bookmarked. kathy
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| us closer
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2008-05-10
excellent images again Katherine sublte verse structure and awesom images of a sad love well done rgds Mike
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| as I watch
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2008-05-10
and night sleeping for once
in mirrors answers untold
as I watch you breath
Your soft and gentle breathing
The murmur of the Night
and like Tom Paxton simply dont know where i am bound
well sone atmospheric rgds mike
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| Where the water runs, How the water flows
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2008-05-08
Brian i will start again you are a mothers boy and so what this is a lovely poem for her well done dancer
rgds Mike
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| Where the water runs, How the water flows
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2008-05-08
Brian
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| Silencio
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2008-05-08
i will
say one thing it reminds me of the silence found in an empty yet half lit room natural light of course quite empty without pictures on the walls and at gloaming or even dawn
you can almost hear the silence thundering this poem is so evocative well done rgds Mike
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| SMW pt. XXIV
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2008-05-06
Brian this is deep prophetivc thinking and this series is so compelling have you ever seen a book called 'Women and the Wits' by a fellow called Monkswood i amsure you would find it interesting its a series of two line thoughts on the vagaries og women well done again rgds mike
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| rain comes by
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2008-05-05
Katherine this is amongst your very best and subtle of texts and its so true into ecvery life alittle rain must fall we ll done its a beautiful poem rgds mike
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| Many a Day, I think what I could've been.
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2008-05-05
A regretful text Andre but so cleverlu woven the message is clear to all think before you leap well done subtle writing rgd Mike
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| Snake Skin Revelations
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2008-05-05
Katherine i am so glad that this fellow is expurgated form your life and your heart. This poem is so powerful and so hard hitting wow baby if he didnt know them he does now sweetheartwell done on your courage baby and remember i lobe you endlessly xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxylk ly vvvm
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| Before and After: A Comparison of my Writing Skills...Part 2
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2008-05-02
Hey man first the style again very communicative and obviously talented so well done i oersonally prefered the ist version, but this second version reveals a young man with a romanitc heart and an eye for female beauty well done sir from one old romantic to a young one rgds Mike and very welcome to the bay.
have you ever read Robert graves ' A goodbye to all that' your style is reminiscent.
Graves once said that he was advised by his English master at Charterhouse school England, that a writers best friend was the wastepaper bin, one could not edit too often well done young sir
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| Before and After: A Comparison of my Writing Skills...Part 1
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2008-05-02
sheer wisdom of the spirit nick and so welcome from the much maligned younger generation. You write excellently. Your style is very pleasing to follow and that denotes a strong sense of communication well done rgds mike
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| Perfectly You
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2008-05-02
wow what a way to say i love you excellent writing economy of words and the words are
Purest love rgds mike
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| Where are we going . . .
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2008-05-02
sheer tenderness of the soul Dan and a powerful message to one and all well done rgds mike
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| Looking back
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2008-05-02
Non finer none with more beauty than thispoem you certainly did it with this one Christian in my favs rgds mike
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| Dear Mother, A Letter of Remembrance
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2008-05-02
Katherine this is a wonderful tribute for your mother and so appropriate as mothers day approaches she sound so lovely and as pretty as you by all accounts this is a poem that reveals your love and your missing of her. well done katherine xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxylk ly vm this is going into my favs baby
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| Uisce beatha
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2008-05-01
this text is so evocative of places and times i had long ago before the world turned in side out and came crashing down all around us
i too remember beaches where no one came as i rolled at the waters edge and looked beyond the shores on pentland firth
to where the norse gods sang in worship of the way to valhalla
well done on your imagery rgds mike
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| SMW pt. XXI
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2008-05-01
the difference betwixt the possible and impossible is the measure on ones will well done brian rgds mike
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| SMW pt. XXII
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2008-05-01
Brian you are one of the sites most original thinkers and i salute your rgds mike wonderful thoughts
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| SMW pt. XXIII
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2008-05-01
wisdom untold in this series of passages brian well done rgds Mike
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| we await
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2008-05-01
Homeros dreaming by the lake
in the shadows of kings
and the little Prince
still watering
Spectacular writing spectacular feelings induced in these lines well don on the sophisitcation rgds mike
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| Site Info April
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2008-04-30
thank for the information Klas much appreciated rgds \mike
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| Petra
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2008-04-30
Another wonderful poem and you friend has a wisdom beyond her years.
And i guess your sophisitcated text shows you have one too well done rgds Mike
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| dried paint
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2008-04-30
this poem is a perfect example of young talent coming to the fore it is so sophisitcated and i welcome you to this site. The site needs young talent such as you well done and welcome rgds mike
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| Inside Out
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2008-04-29
This is a very emotive text in many ways and sets your style perfectly i am sure you will be welcomed here well done and welcome rgds Mike
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| Re-born
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2008-04-29
I find this poem as sophisitcated as they come a very beautiful look at yourself and a beautiful asset to the site well done and welcome here rgds
mike
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| ages of a man
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2008-04-29
Peter this is a wonderful nostalgic text and for me it has that air of A E Houseman or even R S Thomas well done rgds Mike
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| Reach Out to the Children...
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2008-04-29
hey Man you are back this is a wonderful return and welcome the message children are the unsung treasures we have rgds mike
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| Satisfaction
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2008-04-27
Christian this is a testament and a tribute to a beautiful love well done rgds mike a wonderful thoughtful text on the meaning of love all those who wonder what it is should read this texts well done again rgds mike
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| Shuck You
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2008-04-27
Hi there again young man this is a wonderful and fun poem the style shows the joy of the poet in its making well done rgds Mike and welcome back
rgds mike
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| The Dog.
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2008-04-27
A powerful poem Nick and an interesting piece of local history now turned into folklore i bet rgds mike well done
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| Soup for Breakfast
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2008-04-27
I am not a soup man Peter but you made my mouth water with this culinary delight well done rgds Mike
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| sleep
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2008-04-27
Ah sleep oh for the sleep of the innocent man amongst us a powerful statemnent on the essential 33.333 % of our lives a wonderfully ryhthmic text and a timely reminder.
well done regards Mike
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| Big Al Here!
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2008-04-26
Oh and happy birthday big Al rgds mike
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| Big Al Here!
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2008-04-26
Esti a wonderful contribution for big Al congrats on your skill rgds Mike
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| in vertigo
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2008-04-26
And what abeautiful poem for a wonderful lover this is as usual your sophisitcated nostalgic poetery well done my friend rgds Mike
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| Love Is A Tree
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2008-04-26
Darling katherine this beautiful villanelle is the enchanting result of a love nurtured in your soul it is a wonderful way of cherishing that love and the villanelle format adds to the beauty of the text i am reminded oof the beaty of Almond blossom time, spring anew and the devastating beauty of you xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxwell done ylkly vm
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| white waiting
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2008-04-25
Katherine this is a powerful and stark poem of the loneliness felt by many in a love.
All the long and the lonely tears
I cried for you
Were so bitter as they fell
Oh the pain in my heart
That dindt die when you left me
Twenty two years of wondering why
And now i am through for I
Am moving on
well done on your powerful text and brave style rgds mike
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| Does it have to be your way?
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2008-04-24
Dancer you move amongst us and leave these gems of wisdom for us to ponder well done again sir rgds mike
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| mute
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2008-04-24
There is nothing mute about this beautiful text it ooses love well done its beautiful and i book mark it rgds mike
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| Now
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2008-04-22
a masterful stroke of genius to intermingle comedy with tongue in the cheek philosophy well done stan rgds mike
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| doubt
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2008-04-22
I dont want to cry this early in the dawning
i dont want to lose your smile
i dont want to shed these tears of longing until it is time
so lay right down beside me and leave the leaving
to later on
A wonderful text katherine love on show rgds mike
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| why
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2008-04-22
he dances that close because he loves you and his lips burn for you well done on a brilliant love text
rgds mike
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| Gratitude
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2008-04-21
a wonderful accoladeto the beauty you see in a loved one and the fire in your heart becomes a blaze to worm us here well done jeanette rgds Mike
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| Oh God.
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2008-04-21
a powerful and heart rending poem for a loved one i feel you pain young lady and pray rgds Mike
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| Maybe it's too late / More than friends
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2008-04-20
iots never too late sir and in 1959 I think i was about in the same state as you 18 and in love lolol well done on the trip sir well done i book mark it and welcome back rgds mike
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| Gone
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2008-04-20
And all the ramifications of what might have been and what iffs are embodied in this exceptioal text i and ciuntless others have been there but few could write of it so eloquently well done rgds mike
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from UK