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Pamela A Lamppa

66 years old from USA


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Great Awakening

2007-06-17
I like this side of you.:o)


Green Moss Grow

2007-06-15
Simple words placed perfectly on a page is called POETRY.
This is excellent.
It flows, it stands, it screams statement. Well done.
An excellent piece. ~Pamela


I Wish I Were A Melon

2007-06-15
Wish I had a watermelon wish I had a watermelon

That kept going through my head reading this from the old "Lil Rascals comedy series - ugh way way way back when.

Nice work. ~Pamela


Cry a tear

2007-06-12
If each could shed just one tear with true feeling, perhaps then there may be that single step toward change. I liked this a great deal. ~Pamela


Entwine.

2007-06-12
Ah, that gut-wrenching feeling of hopelessness. How do you pull all those sense together when such a moment happens? Somehow we manage it. Very well done. I enjoyed this a great deal. ~Pamela


A smile For Hope.

2007-06-12
None that I know. This is such elegant poetry my friend. Truly enjoyable. ~Pamela


Stepping From Your Truck You Were Sexy

2007-05-22
Well OHHHHH YEAHHHHHH! You are ONE GOOD WOMAN. This was just a pure pleasure to read and enjoy. Superb! ~Pam


no more

2007-05-21
This is soft within the cold reality of heartbreak. I liked this.

we, a making of loneliness.

How it hurts when we are in that place.



Nicely done. ~Pam


arrows

2007-05-21
Nice images presented here with an "almost there" metaphore. Keep penning. ~Pam


Early Morning Awakenings

2007-05-21
Ahhh, beautifully written with exceptional meter and flow. This was just a delight to read and enjoy. Your title caught, your words kept. Well done. ~Pamela


Important

2007-05-21
Excellent proclamations:
This line:

"Move further in your life as you grow"

Ahh very very good. We do move further in life as we grow.
Nicely written this. An enjoyable verse to read. ~Pamela


The Earth, Moon and the Sun

2007-05-21
It is always about the communicating.

Souls live on, west or east, north or south, all part of the one and ever in balance no matter the rise. There is only the life force joining all.

An interesting piece. I enjoyed this. ~Pamela


The Vertical Street

2007-05-21
Vertical Street - Oh I loved that title and the poem is dark with harsh realities. Well done. Your commentaries on humanity, though dark, are ever so spot on. Wonderful stuff coming from that mind. Excellent poetry. Such a pleasure to see here on the bay. ~Pamela


Humantis

2007-05-21
Oh this is a very clever take on human nature. Excellent poetry. Well done indeed. I will read more... ~Pamela


I sitt and Wait

2007-05-21
Beautiful love poem. Nicely done. I enjoyed this one. ~Pamela


So Completly Yours

2007-05-21
A very pretty and emotional piece. Nice work. ~Pamela


Golden Wheat Fields vs Concrete Jungle

2007-05-19
Excellent piece. Superb use of language and visual images. Wonderful work my friend. I enjoyed this a great deal. ~Pamela


wishing

2007-05-19
Heartfelt sentiment. Nicely done. ~Pamela


Pale thigh

2007-05-19
Wow. My tongue tripped and tangoed all through this piece. Really really well done. Slowed me just enough to grasp. Ahh. I loved it. ~Pamela *rose*


As the tear drops...

2007-05-19
Ahhhh. Slow read is truly best with this magical piece. I spiraled into place like clockwork. Well done. A truly enjoyable verse. ~Pamela


nonsense

2007-05-19
indeed an amusing muse. Excellent. ~Pamela


What Is This Life.

2007-05-19
Ahhh. Peace of mind. Something we all need when that question of Why enters into our thoughts. Perhaps the answer simply is because it just IS. *smile* I enjoyed this introspective piece very much. Well done as always my friend. ~Pamela


A better time

2007-05-19
Truly an amazing write. I was so moved to think on "a better time" An excellent verse to be read many times and admired. Well done. ~Pamela


The Sweet Aroma Of Soft Vanilla by M.A.Meddings

2007-05-19
Simply beautifully stirring of all the senses. Dangerously delicious! Excellent - as always. ~Pamela


Amorphic

2007-04-21
I liked this a great deal. "Time is a cloud enveloping truth"
that is an awesome line and a note to live by. Wonderful words. I am surprised more people haven't commented on this poem. It is very good. Truly struck a chord with me today. Well done. A pleasure to have read and enjoyed. ~Pamela


Automated Poetry

2007-04-16
LOL - Oh my, I have BEEN here. I liked this. :o) ~Pamela


The Breakthrough Science of the Glycemic Advantage

2007-04-16
Excellent. I wonder sometimes what the general populous thinks. I guess not much because they are "buying it".
Sad state of affairs, as you have so adeptly stated in this piece.
This is excellent. I enjoyed this one from top to bottom. Well done. ~Pamela


Humility in thin air

2007-04-15
Excellent piece.
Absolutely excellent!


Via Dolorosa

2007-04-06
Zoya, you have penned profound dear poetess. A beautiful spiritual piece that set the human emotion to humble. Beautiful writing and filled with what moves your spirit. Well done. ~Pamela


Sophisticated Grace by M.A.Meddings

2007-04-06
Simply delightful and Katherine should hold this one in her Easter bonnet forever. JUST beautiful. You just warmed my soul. :o) ~Pamela


Wings of Poesy

2007-04-06
It is amazing what our eyes will feel when truly observing the world's beauty. This sang to me Zoya, and such a delightful tune it was. A pleasure to have read and enjoyed today. ~Pamela


Romance by stealth

2007-04-06
This was simply an sensational presentation of senses. I am thrilled to see such an exercise presented here. It will truly make me think more of colors and music as I continue to write and learn. LOVED this. ~Pamela


Rusty head

2007-04-06
Ahhh. Simply washed out with the tide. This was just delightful and so very visual. I am partial to the sound and sight of the sea anyway so this stanza really grabbed me:

" And as the seagulls call to me
mesmorized by how they fly
i feel the centre of gravity move
and tumble through a jet black eye."

Just a pleasure to have read this today. Excellent work. ~Pamela


Love is the most complicated thing ever!!

2007-04-06
It is a craZy mIx is it not? Excellent expression. I love where you took this piece. ~Pamela


A Suspicious Mind.

2007-04-06
Oh it is a dreadful place when mistrust enters in. If only to find the sunshine again...
A lovely work. Perfect flow and rhythm and a pleasure to read and enjoy. Nicely done. ~Pamela


my fate on the love's ropes

2007-04-06
Such a beautiful plea for the heart of love. Delightful. I enjoyed this a great deal. Thank you. ~Pamela


Come the whisper of the fool

2007-04-06
When there is no peace, it does sing the fools song... Ahhh. Great title for this most introspective piece. A pleasure to have read today, though I am left a bit windblown. Nice work. ~Pamela


This viral world

2007-04-03
Oh my. This almost hurt to read, yet is too close to being real to disregard. A strong and somber work. I enjoyed this piece immensely. ~Pamela


Going Nowhere

2007-04-01
Nice Haiku. I know these feelings all too well. *sigh* Well done. ~Pamela


Reality's delusion

2007-04-01
Wow. This is a good piece. Hard. Cold. Very tough and brisk. Well done. LOVE your use of language here. Nice work. ~Pamela


Cherished by M.A.Meddings

2007-03-31
...the gentle peace of you.
that line says it all.
always a wonderful poem when I read your work.
Just lovely. ~Pamela


FEAR (acrostic)

2007-03-31
FEAR indeed, and pure panic. Excellent acrostic. Nice work. ~Pamela


The love's arrows

2007-03-31
Well put. So simple but to the point and so very true. I enjoyed this tight piece immensely. Well done poet. :o) ~Pamela


How Bitter Sweet.

2007-03-31
Beautiful. Simply beautiful.
It truly is a bittersweet, the pleaure and the pain
of love. Wonderful write. ~Pamela


Be my Silver Moon in Autumn

2007-03-31
Absolutely beautiful. Who would not want to be the breeze of summer that cools the brow in the labyrinth of love. Wonderful penning. A pleasure to have read this today. ~Pamela


A Massage Message

2007-03-31
Wonderful little twist in here. A pleasure to have read and enjoyed. Nice work. ~Pamela


Hipperasurous Happening Hoopla

2006-06-17
Oh GOD. I just wanted to get to that Hootenanny Hoedown in the WORST way. Delightful. The title begged to be read and truly did not disappoint. LOVED it. Simply LOVED it. ~Pam


Reflections Of What Should Be

2006-06-17
Tossed at mercy on the waves, until hope nestles in and scoops the artist.
Oh, this was just delightful. A pleasure to read such fine work. ~Pam :o)


Burning Love

2006-06-17
A Very nice Haiku/Senryu. I hope you did well on this assignment. Nicely done. ~Pam


Who has the Answers?

2006-06-08
Such an introspective piece that delivers much emotion as it is wrapped within the elements. Wonderfully crafted and thought out. A pleasure to read such fine work. ~Pam