Great Awakening
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2007-06-17 I like this side of you.:o)
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Green Moss Grow
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2007-06-15 Simple words placed perfectly on a page is called POETRY.
This is excellent.
It flows, it stands, it screams statement. Well done.
An excellent piece. ~Pamela
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I Wish I Were A Melon
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2007-06-15 Wish I had a watermelon wish I had a watermelon
That kept going through my head reading this from the old "Lil Rascals comedy series - ugh way way way back when.
Nice work. ~Pamela
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Cry a tear
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2007-06-12 If each could shed just one tear with true feeling, perhaps then there may be that single step toward change. I liked this a great deal. ~Pamela
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Entwine.
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2007-06-12 Ah, that gut-wrenching feeling of hopelessness. How do you pull all those sense together when such a moment happens? Somehow we manage it. Very well done. I enjoyed this a great deal. ~Pamela
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A smile For Hope.
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2007-06-12 None that I know. This is such elegant poetry my friend. Truly enjoyable. ~Pamela
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Stepping From Your Truck You Were Sexy
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2007-05-22 Well OHHHHH YEAHHHHHH! You are ONE GOOD WOMAN. This was just a pure pleasure to read and enjoy. Superb! ~Pam
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no more
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2007-05-21 This is soft within the cold reality of heartbreak. I liked this.
we, a making of loneliness.
How it hurts when we are in that place.
Nicely done. ~Pam
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arrows
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2007-05-21 Nice images presented here with an "almost there" metaphore. Keep penning. ~Pam
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Early Morning Awakenings
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2007-05-21 Ahhh, beautifully written with exceptional meter and flow. This was just a delight to read and enjoy. Your title caught, your words kept. Well done. ~Pamela
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Important
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2007-05-21 Excellent proclamations:
This line:
"Move further in your life as you grow"
Ahh very very good. We do move further in life as we grow.
Nicely written this. An enjoyable verse to read. ~Pamela
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The Earth, Moon and the Sun
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2007-05-21 It is always about the communicating.
Souls live on, west or east, north or south, all part of the one and ever in balance no matter the rise. There is only the life force joining all.
An interesting piece. I enjoyed this. ~Pamela
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The Vertical Street
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2007-05-21 Vertical Street - Oh I loved that title and the poem is dark with harsh realities. Well done. Your commentaries on humanity, though dark, are ever so spot on. Wonderful stuff coming from that mind. Excellent poetry. Such a pleasure to see here on the bay. ~Pamela
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Humantis
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2007-05-21 Oh this is a very clever take on human nature. Excellent poetry. Well done indeed. I will read more... ~Pamela
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I sitt and Wait
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2007-05-21 Beautiful love poem. Nicely done. I enjoyed this one. ~Pamela
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So Completly Yours
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2007-05-21 A very pretty and emotional piece. Nice work. ~Pamela
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Golden Wheat Fields vs Concrete Jungle
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2007-05-19 Excellent piece. Superb use of language and visual images. Wonderful work my friend. I enjoyed this a great deal. ~Pamela
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wishing
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2007-05-19 Heartfelt sentiment. Nicely done. ~Pamela
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Pale thigh
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2007-05-19 Wow. My tongue tripped and tangoed all through this piece. Really really well done. Slowed me just enough to grasp. Ahh. I loved it. ~Pamela *rose*
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As the tear drops...
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2007-05-19 Ahhhh. Slow read is truly best with this magical piece. I spiraled into place like clockwork. Well done. A truly enjoyable verse. ~Pamela
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nonsense
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2007-05-19 indeed an amusing muse. Excellent. ~Pamela
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What Is This Life.
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2007-05-19 Ahhh. Peace of mind. Something we all need when that question of Why enters into our thoughts. Perhaps the answer simply is because it just IS. *smile* I enjoyed this introspective piece very much. Well done as always my friend. ~Pamela
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A better time
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2007-05-19 Truly an amazing write. I was so moved to think on "a better time" An excellent verse to be read many times and admired. Well done. ~Pamela
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The Sweet Aroma Of Soft Vanilla by M.A.Meddings
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2007-05-19 Simply beautifully stirring of all the senses. Dangerously delicious! Excellent - as always. ~Pamela
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Amorphic
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2007-04-21 I liked this a great deal. "Time is a cloud enveloping truth"
that is an awesome line and a note to live by. Wonderful words. I am surprised more people haven't commented on this poem. It is very good. Truly struck a chord with me today. Well done. A pleasure to have read and enjoyed. ~Pamela
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Automated Poetry
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2007-04-16 LOL - Oh my, I have BEEN here. I liked this. :o) ~Pamela
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The Breakthrough Science of the Glycemic Advantage
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2007-04-16 Excellent. I wonder sometimes what the general populous thinks. I guess not much because they are "buying it".
Sad state of affairs, as you have so adeptly stated in this piece.
This is excellent. I enjoyed this one from top to bottom. Well done. ~Pamela
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Humility in thin air
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2007-04-15 Excellent piece.
Absolutely excellent!
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Via Dolorosa
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2007-04-06 Zoya, you have penned profound dear poetess. A beautiful spiritual piece that set the human emotion to humble. Beautiful writing and filled with what moves your spirit. Well done. ~Pamela
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Sophisticated Grace by M.A.Meddings
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2007-04-06 Simply delightful and Katherine should hold this one in her Easter bonnet forever. JUST beautiful. You just warmed my soul. :o) ~Pamela
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Wings of Poesy
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2007-04-06 It is amazing what our eyes will feel when truly observing the world's beauty. This sang to me Zoya, and such a delightful tune it was. A pleasure to have read and enjoyed today. ~Pamela
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Romance by stealth
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2007-04-06 This was simply an sensational presentation of senses. I am thrilled to see such an exercise presented here. It will truly make me think more of colors and music as I continue to write and learn. LOVED this. ~Pamela
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Rusty head
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2007-04-06 Ahhh. Simply washed out with the tide. This was just delightful and so very visual. I am partial to the sound and sight of the sea anyway so this stanza really grabbed me:
" And as the seagulls call to me
mesmorized by how they fly
i feel the centre of gravity move
and tumble through a jet black eye."
Just a pleasure to have read this today. Excellent work. ~Pamela
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Love is the most complicated thing ever!!
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2007-04-06 It is a craZy mIx is it not? Excellent expression. I love where you took this piece. ~Pamela
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A Suspicious Mind.
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2007-04-06 Oh it is a dreadful place when mistrust enters in. If only to find the sunshine again...
A lovely work. Perfect flow and rhythm and a pleasure to read and enjoy. Nicely done. ~Pamela
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my fate on the love's ropes
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2007-04-06 Such a beautiful plea for the heart of love. Delightful. I enjoyed this a great deal. Thank you. ~Pamela
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Come the whisper of the fool
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2007-04-06 When there is no peace, it does sing the fools song... Ahhh. Great title for this most introspective piece. A pleasure to have read today, though I am left a bit windblown. Nice work. ~Pamela
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This viral world
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2007-04-03 Oh my. This almost hurt to read, yet is too close to being real to disregard. A strong and somber work. I enjoyed this piece immensely. ~Pamela
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Going Nowhere
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2007-04-01 Nice Haiku. I know these feelings all too well. *sigh* Well done. ~Pamela
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Reality's delusion
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2007-04-01 Wow. This is a good piece. Hard. Cold. Very tough and brisk. Well done. LOVE your use of language here. Nice work. ~Pamela
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Cherished by M.A.Meddings
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2007-03-31 ...the gentle peace of you.
that line says it all.
always a wonderful poem when I read your work.
Just lovely. ~Pamela
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FEAR (acrostic)
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2007-03-31 FEAR indeed, and pure panic. Excellent acrostic. Nice work. ~Pamela
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The love's arrows
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2007-03-31 Well put. So simple but to the point and so very true. I enjoyed this tight piece immensely. Well done poet. :o) ~Pamela
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How Bitter Sweet.
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2007-03-31 Beautiful. Simply beautiful.
It truly is a bittersweet, the pleaure and the pain
of love. Wonderful write. ~Pamela
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Be my Silver Moon in Autumn
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2007-03-31 Absolutely beautiful. Who would not want to be the breeze of summer that cools the brow in the labyrinth of love. Wonderful penning. A pleasure to have read this today. ~Pamela
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A Massage Message
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2007-03-31 Wonderful little twist in here. A pleasure to have read and enjoyed. Nice work. ~Pamela
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Hipperasurous Happening Hoopla
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2006-06-17 Oh GOD. I just wanted to get to that Hootenanny Hoedown in the WORST way. Delightful. The title begged to be read and truly did not disappoint. LOVED it. Simply LOVED it. ~Pam
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Reflections Of What Should Be
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2006-06-17 Tossed at mercy on the waves, until hope nestles in and scoops the artist.
Oh, this was just delightful. A pleasure to read such fine work. ~Pam :o)
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Burning Love
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2006-06-17 A Very nice Haiku/Senryu. I hope you did well on this assignment. Nicely done. ~Pam
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Who has the Answers?
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2006-06-08 Such an introspective piece that delivers much emotion as it is wrapped within the elements. Wonderfully crafted and thought out. A pleasure to read such fine work. ~Pam
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