muddy waters

2006-08-11
Very good imagery, the use of the drops of water symbolysing days, that, essentially is the same as the next. But what can you relly do, except watch them in awe? I also think the format you chose fit in very well, with one word on the beginning of every stanza. It really makes the words stand out.

Overall, very nice. I enjoyed reading it.

2005-11-25
Just as beautiful as sad and heartwarming. I adore the wording, it just kickstarts your imagination and makes you want to go write soething yourself. (thanks :)

2005-09-01
very interesting read, gives you a sort of strange late night perspective on things.

2005-08-25
beautiful. I hope you get a lot of reads on this one ;)