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2007-03-05
excellent flow and imagery for me here, rich words exceeding the iaginations expectation wonderful piece of writing here, Bravo, bravo, bravo:)
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| A Haiku
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2007-03-05
very nice KU here, enjoyed this short read
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| Poor Ophelia...
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2007-03-02
Wow!
The tempo to this piece is stunning!
your words reallt tell thetale and invoke
the meaning and fellings of this piece
A wonderful read!
thanks for sharing this here
Bravo, Bravo, Bravo!!!
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| going there
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2007-03-02
This again is very evocative as your last but in all it sends a clear message and places us in Union Square with you watching:)
very nice to travel on imginations highway,
thanks for the ride
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| between
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2007-03-02
THis is quite a different form of poetry and as such many things can be read into it.
However, I felt a sense of betrayel here or at least this is what you might have been trying to invoke in the reader,
profound messages came to me from this piece
well done here
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| we speak
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2007-02-28
softly spoken but heard very well, you pen speaks with a strong voice
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| memories
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2007-02-28
A wonderful testament to one you love. very nice
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from USA 