| Light Against The Black
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2009-12-09
delicate and true imagery though the rhymes seem forced sometimes.
good structure, could be a great intense piece of work...but the rhymes test me.
absinthe-absence-arrogance-ambulance....very nice.
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| Ash
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2009-12-02
This was really good, i don't say that much around here. honest, genuine and original...you said it best.
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| Poem A Day No. 1
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2009-11-29
Crass...not worth the click...exactly what I was going for.
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| Childrens Prayer!
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2009-08-12
is that what that is....i'm pretty much athiest or a-something....amoral.....but i always thought this passage to be drama.
good post...unexpected and truth.
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| Greater Love Hath No Woman Than For A Self-Confessed B*stard
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2009-07-24
'wolf in wolf's clothing'...if i haven't heard that before, thanks, i will use it in everyday conversation.
ps- women are crazy.
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| Innocence
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2009-07-23
nice freewheeling....like the freedom....could do with some bite somewhere though. well done
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