I wrote this in my mind as she smiled on me this morning


Why? by M.A.Meddings

Why do I tremble 
And why do I sigh 
Why do I get this feeling 
E'en though I try to control it 
Why does my heart skip a thousand beats 
Every time we chance to meet 
My life has become so new 
The very moment I met you 
And in considerd thoughts conclude 
That it simply is my love for you  
And that my love,
Is Why 





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Written on 2007-07-28 at 08:24

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Kathy Lockhart
and you have given me the answer to Why I feel those exact same feelings honey. It is love. I am lifted up to the elation of pure joy because of you. This is tender and sweet and overflowing with your love. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxyb
2007-07-28


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
Love is a funny thing - makes you feel and do all sorts of things - lovely words Mike

Elle x
2007-07-28


kath
it is as simple as that but still so complex that we never will know why or how it works ... but your words tell of this wonderful mystery we call love ...

sweet and tenders words just as love is suposed to be
best wishes
kath
2007-07-28


Hagzissa
Yupp....... and you do have your way with words to describe those feelings so well, inviting the reader to an emotional trip which really gives a first row insight. It's always easier to relate to a text when going through the same of course, but even if that wasn't the case, this is so well written that no-one , unless they're stone-cold, can miss out on the strong feelings in this one.
Well done!!!!!!!!!
2007-07-28

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