An attempt to translate it and perhaps 'improve it'(from swedish to english, written 2008-07-25 kl 18:30 the original text(my text)can be found here)

The hunt is over! * Hooray! Hooray! Hooray! *


You cannot catch me!
Fly, run, swim, dig!
Up or down?!

You cannot capture me!
Look through the horizon
Take a look around you
Dive into the deepest waters
Did you reach the bottom?

up or down?


You will find only one thing!
A GRAVE or a roar of laughter!

Your laughter.

Down or Up! Are you still searching?
Are you going to bury yourself in papers?
Or. . .
Are you going to dig your way up and
find your way?

Noone can take what is yours
because what is yours is a inseparable
integral part of the world!

The components of life itself?
Look no further

your nose!

See what's available!
Know what is available
and why! Who are you




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Written on 2011-10-30 at 22:41

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A comical one! :-D Enjoyed it thoroughly.

Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
good write, Soul Woman, though I must admit that when
I look no further than my nose, all I find is my nose

xxx Stan


A year of few words
by night soul woman