Few sparks did scatter

on an icy floor

before dying down

in a mass of dark soot.


Her glimpse did evoke

inspite all,

a painful



One day callously

as she walked past.


Poetry by sagi
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Written on 2014-09-14 at 22:56

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Beautiful words as the sparks still fly, but burn quickly on the icy floor. I am not quoting, of course, your words reach into the hearts of all who have memories.

Bibek The PoetBay support member heart!
Short and sweet. :)

Amim Akhter
One could burnt it all up...but what to do of those ashes..brautifully written my friend

BM Barde
_One day callously
As she works pass me._
Drunked love this line, ure genius about her disregading. Nicely penned.

F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
Lack of recognition for your existence and how much the strength of feelings for her would not be taken into account by her... poignant in a seizing way for me, where one side bleeds and the other shuns without any sort of reasons to do so... I like the choice of words, and the brevity... creates an impact that can't go unnoticed for the reader, in my opinion... beautifully written.

hmmm ... haunting little poem. I like it! Very nice flow and vivid imagery.


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