reaper's list

reaper's list

laden with lightning
and rain
-- night fell

drear day followed
-- wet
- cold

from yonder precincts
clouds more formed
west -- a little north

portending more rain

while reaper reads his
list of those
waiting in line to leave

at which he will
be in
-- attendance

on pyroclastic mounds
of powdered bones
deep as last winter's snowdrifts

-- last breath breathers
queued up -- some
ready to go -- some not

as movie goers
standing on line
for next feature film

not even having
read
-- the reviews

some or most
have hung many a -- veil
between their brain and truth

-- dying in darkness.

vcp

28 July 2016




Poetry by Victor
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Written on 2016-07-28 at 22:35

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Kathy Lockhart
very chilling-- dark/death images created through each line.
I enjoyed the comparison between the theater line and those lined up for dying. Very "Stephen Kingish" :) kathy
2016-07-29