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like candy in a fruit tree
like hippopotami in a cold pond
there’s no limit to the imagination
just a wish for it to bond

 

into swirling, hurtling daydreams
where lonely arms will take caress
and where I think about the day
when you wore that lovely dress

 

and the mountains move so slowly
I tie your hair into a bow
staring now forever
into thoughts you’ll never know

 

into a mystery where there is cadence
where there is truth within our hearts
that will hold the tiny fragments
which represent our parts





Poetry by Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2017-04-17 at 13:30

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shells
I missed this gem of a piece. Favourite stanzas are the final two.
2017-04-30


Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
To me this is real poetry. Imaginative, inspiring, pleasant to read and thought provoking. Bravo.
2017-04-23