How Will You Remember Me?

Will the thought of me place a smile upon your face?
Did my positive energy make your heart race?
Will tears fall when I no longer walk this place?

How will you remember me?

When the scent of the ocean is in the air?
When you see a woman with windblown blonde hair?
Do you have any memories of me to share?

What will you tell the world about me?

That my heart was on fire and I was free?
That my touch was a sensation that completed thee...

How will you remember me?

My love,


Poetry by Ashe
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Written on 2018-08-24 at 19:45

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
This is so wonderful. How do we wish to be remembered? How will we be remembered? I often wonder what past loves now think. If we can bring a smile to the lips of the person remembering us, that is enough.

France England
Oh my love, dear tender moment I shall remember you by the beating of your heart and the warmth by which love on a platter serves my suggestion and what is to come. You shall be the the exhale of my every release of stress held captive. For true I love the taste of your mouth.

josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
I had to com back. There is a vulnerability expressed here in a beautiful guileness fashion that draws the reader in it's innocence. Very well written.

josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
I will remember you my lady for your words phrases and loving laughing pen. Such a wonderful if Melancholy poem.

Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
Deeply moving. Ashe, I cannot imagine anyone forgetting the complex beauty of you and who you are. Hugs

Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
I like your proposed answers better than the one you expect.