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Funny how
A video
Can make you smile?

I saw one
Recently of
My sister dancing.

She always
Was shy
But seeing her on stage

Was elating.
I never knew
She had it in her.

Funny how
A video
Can make you proud?




Poetry by Sameen
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Written on 2019-07-23 at 23:22

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Nice and simple Sameen. But very meaningful.
2019-07-24


Marie Cadavieco The PoetBay support member heart!
Even those closest to us can keep a surprise up their sleeve! I like these very short lines as you reveal that your sister has not only made you smile - but that you are proud of her. I hope she knows. Your poem reminded me of how I feel about my brother! Thank you for this short but lovely poem which has made me smile.
- Marie
2019-07-24


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
Very nice! Beautifully expressed in short and surgical style.
2019-07-24



Wonderful! A winsome scene nicely captured in quick, sure brushstrokes. Well done!
2019-07-23