Pick your battles,count your blessings,
all these advice,oh,so depressing.
Let my mind think,out of your thoughts.
Let me solve the puzzle of my minds knots.

Fighting to be me in a world so friendly,
everyone with an opinion that comes out gently.
On how to live life,on how to be me.
Oh,how i wish i could be lost at sea.

Make me forget my own will,
make me pay their own bill.
Alone and thinking i'd rather be,
than in a lost of self loving we.

Pick your battles,count your blessings,
in a world where everybody are kings
on their fellow life,let me be as stubborn
as i want.I have myself to govern.

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Written on 2020-07-29 at 17:07

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jim The PoetBay support member heart!
I like this, your sense of wanting to figure things out for yourself.

Good advice!

ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Bravo! Afrodite, writing out our thoughts, sets us FREE! Being read keeps us FREE. Our readers keeps us FREE!
Ken D
2020-07-29 Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
This has so much emotion as your lines always conjure for me. I really can't help find myself singing along your lines when I read them. That is so neat and one of the things I adore about your writing. So many good lines in here too, a few that strike quite an effective imagery to get across the feelings and thoughts. And my thoughts were I agree that's it's never pleasant to receive unsolicited advice, especially if it feels constant. Can start to get on your nerves after a while lol I got the sense that this is a note to self to not let these things get to your system. Just be you and carry on. Hard, but something possible to do - you can't control how others are, but you can control how you receive it, kind of spirit. As always, just my thoughts. Really enjoyed this, thanks.