ADVICE



Pick your battles,count your blessings,
all these advice,oh,so depressing.
Let my mind think,out of your thoughts.
Let me solve the puzzle of my minds knots.

Fighting to be me in a world so friendly,
everyone with an opinion that comes out gently.
On how to live life,on how to be me.
Oh,how i wish i could be lost at sea.


Make me forget my own will,
make me pay their own bill.
Alone and thinking i'd rather be,
than in a lost of self loving we.


Pick your battles,count your blessings,
in a world where everybody are kings
on their fellow life,let me be as stubborn
as i want.I have myself to govern.





Poetry by AFRODITE STATHI
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Written on 2020-07-29 at 17:07

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jim The PoetBay support member heart!
I like this, your sense of wanting to figure things out for yourself.

Good advice!
2020-08-06


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Bravo! Afrodite, writing out our thoughts, sets us FREE! Being read keeps us FREE. Our readers keeps us FREE!
Ken D
2020-07-29


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
This has so much emotion as your lines always conjure for me. I really can't help find myself singing along your lines when I read them. That is so neat and one of the things I adore about your writing. So many good lines in here too, a few that strike quite an effective imagery to get across the feelings and thoughts. And my thoughts were I agree that's it's never pleasant to receive unsolicited advice, especially if it feels constant. Can start to get on your nerves after a while lol I got the sense that this is a note to self to not let these things get to your system. Just be you and carry on. Hard, but something possible to do - you can't control how others are, but you can control how you receive it, kind of spirit. As always, just my thoughts. Really enjoyed this, thanks.
2020-07-29