From my poetry collection DESTINY.


HEAVY RAIN


Wasting time is my middle name,
seems life is a boring game.
Needs two to be cleverly played
but i am all alone and my years fade.


Darkness in my heart although it's day,
maybe i must learn how to pray.
For nothing around me interests me,
nothing around me cares for me.


I feel under heavy,heavy rain,
no rainbow will be my gain.
Like a barren earth,i have
only my tears that misbehave.


Heavy rain,rain again against me,
you and me lost in the lifes' sea.
We are only made from tears,
you and me together for so many years.




Poetry by AFRODITE STATHI
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Written on 2020-10-16 at 15:41

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bibek adhikari The PoetBay support member heart!
Very dark yet very intriguing -- I like it. :)
2020-10-19


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
Loneliness, sadness, lassitude come through for me in these lines. Squeezes the heart with empathy for the one feeling this way, and although it doesn't exactly fix things, it makes me want to extend my arms for a hug! As always, you leave strong impressions with your words. Well done, thanks.
2020-10-18


jim The PoetBay support member heart!
You paint a dark picture. The Heavy Rain does weigh heavily.

Very good.
2020-10-17