Missing Her Badly

I want her close enough to me

that I can smell what she's thinking,

that I can taste her daydreams,

that I can hear her hair growing.

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Written on 2021-02-26 at 09:05

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
That's awfully close ;) The effect of the descriptions make the desire and yearning nearly throb. No chance of mistaking how important this person is and how missed they are - the feeling completely envelops the moment. It aches to miss someone so bad... Beautiful, brilliant writing, merci.

josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
Intimacy, well defined.