The Rose of awareness

"Look deeply inside yourself and

Try to find yourself.

The ensuing failure is

The true finding"

Wu Hsin



In the silent song of existence


the boundless Rose of awareness blooms


Knowing                                                     timelessly glowing


No one is found                                No one is bound


only presence our true essence


Freedom sings










Poetry by Nils Teodor The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2021-05-01 at 12:11

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Hans Bump The PoetBay support member heart!
The structure is compact and ordered yet describes such a freedom of being. And I like the way you’ve shaped it. This is not an easy thing to achieve. Much appreciated poem.