Spirit

Sparrow-swift, zephyr-breath'd, flower-fringed, cloud-clad God-ghost
come to us and let us know

that we are held by You





Poetry by Tommo The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2021-06-05 at 04:52

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Michael R. Burch The PoetBay support member heart!
Love the alliteration: the first line reminds me a bit of the great Gerard Manley Hopkins. And I like the "spirit" of your poem; the sound and suggestion suit the theme.
2021-06-06


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
Isn't it the nature of a ghost to remain unrevealed, hence the wonder and . . . suspense?
2021-06-05