mirror, the

I've written on my mirror with lipstick
so that each time I shave my hair
it is facing my eyes
"No goals nor methods"




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Written on 2021-07-19 at 06:16

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
Peut-être que mon cerveau l'interprète mal, mais la ligne : "No goals nor methods" se traduit sans buts ni desseins. Cela cré un angle un peu dérisoire envers soi-même comme petit rappel matinal, si la note est dans cette sphère, bien sûr. J'me dis qu'un tel rappel ne doit pas être très inspirant pour le moral et la motivation. Mais voilà, juste mes impressions. J'ai bien aimé l'effet tout de même! Merci.
2021-07-19


Steven Riddle The PoetBay support member heart!
This is fascinating and intriguing. By any chance have you read Eckhart because what you write here is suggestive of much of what he wrote so many centuries ago. “Those who search for God using methods will find methods and lose God.”. And that ultimately, one most even give up the search in order to find. Those are the undertones I hear here. But then, I’m likely to do so. Nicely done.
2021-07-19