i miss you i want you


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There is so much in me,
which reminds me of you;
that it would be appropriate
to say that
i do not miss you
as much as i
want you.

and i want you
like how a leaf
wants a dew drop.

Yes, like that
and absolutely like that.



Poetry by Sona The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2021-08-11 at 22:05

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Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
A lovely expression of that need for what a loved one brings.
2021-11-10


Rob Graber
What a little gem--a sparkling dew drop!
2021-08-15


Hans Bump
Delicate and sweet. Emotionally touching.
2021-08-14


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
primal longing ~~~

it reminds me of a line from a Donovan song:

"When rain has hung the leaves with tears
I want you near, to kill my fears
To help me to leave all my blues behind"
2021-08-13


Anly Stede The PoetBay support member heart!
To miss and to yearn for someone in this manner are very strong feelings and your words get them across clearly. L9-L10 create an emphasis as to how important and needed this person is. This reminds me of a time when my love and I couldn't be together for a while and I felt exactly the way you're describing it. Very nice, thanks.
2021-08-12


Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
it is a charming vignette you have painted here.
2021-08-11