Poem for D.

Yesterday, friend, at 7 Star Grocery

where I was buying bread and coffee

and you were scratching lottery tickets,

I called you beautiful. And you waved off

the compliment. Yeah right, you're crazy.

I could think of nothing to say in my defense

except: I'm crazy in the best possible way.





Poetry by Uncle Meridian The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2021-12-16 at 11:06

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Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
A fine piece of poetry, this.
I love poetry that describes life/experience in tranches, moments.
2021-12-17


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
This is a cinematic poem, I can see it.
2021-12-16


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
A few entries below this is a poem, written in a rhymed, awkward, ridiculous antique style, which asserts that free verse poetry is no good. That writer should read this poem several times to absorb its compact gracefulness.
2021-12-16