A Tortured Soul.

My heart now bleeds and freezes over
Soft tears no longer run
The smile has fallen from my face
In shadows from the sun

The flame no longer burns as bright
But splutters in the dark
A lonesome wind that wails within
The confines of my heart

As sorrow takes its mournful toll
With savage like delight
To smother cries upon their mark
A tortured soul lost in the night.



Poetry by penfold18
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Written on 2006-06-20 at 10:21

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Arti
Beautiful, mournful write. Wonder why I haven't read your works before!
"A lonesome wind that wails within
The confines of my heart"
**shivers**
((hugs))
Arti.
2006-06-20


Kathy Lockhart
My words are not adequate so I will simply say, "Excellent!" : ) kathy
2006-06-20


Zoya Zaidi
"The flame no longer burns as bright
But splutters in the dark
A lonesome wind that wails within
The confines of my heart"

Oh, how the heart cries?
How the soul so moans,
How the anguish gnaws at my heart,
How the spirit drones...

***Hugs dear Graham for a very heart rending piece***
My heart cries for you...
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-06-20


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
well done graham a normal polished performance and good to see you back rgds mike
2006-06-20


shiviolet
"sorrow takes over with savage like delight.."hmm..beautiful choice of words..throughout the poem
2006-06-20