about pretending to be something your not


you dont know me

you see me walking down the street
so you ask me my name
if i told you would you believe
that the personi was is not who i became
my mind and soul seperated at three
the story you seek is rough
the person you want i can never be
my heart shattered by a tattered love
darkness clouds my view
the sun refuses to shine
what else can i do
the truth i cannot find





Poetry by raven
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Written on 2006-06-23 at 20:52

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A very well written poem!!!
It tells a truth.
Great work!
2006-10-17


sara
i absolutley love it!!
brings things into perspective
it is so true!!
2006-06-26


Arti
"darkness clouds my view
the sun refuses to shine
what else can i do
the truth i cannot find"
{{Shudder}}....I'm cold!
Beautiful vivid write.
((hugs))
2006-06-24


kittipuusen
It was beautiful :)
"the story you seek is rough
the person you want i can never be"
wonderful :)
*hugs*
2006-06-23


Love Knight
i like the comparisons and details.
2006-06-23