Temporal Hopscotch of the Runaway Mind

After what feels like a million years,
I'm back in the city I was born in,
and though I expected nostalgia's five-fingered-kiss
instead, I'm suffering from this: a runaway mind. Let me explain:
I could be riding my bike, turn my head,
and see a road on which I kissed a girl at 12,
and though my body would continue riding off, my mind
would be stuck, on that road, still living that time.

Or, I could be walking in an alley and suddenly remember,
how I once danced here to cheer up a friend, and though
my legs would carry me to my destination my mind
would be patiently reliving the scene on repeat,
unwilling to leave.

And it's happened often enough, I feel,
simply existing here, that I'm living twice,
thrice, in multitudes, because, everywhere I go,
everything I do,
pieces of my mind splinter off,
and go live scenes I've already lived before,
leaving the me of right now feeling hollow. Am I even
living anymore, or am I just a prison
from which to escape to happier days?




Poetry by Sameen
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Written on 2022-08-06 at 17:40

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2022-08-15


Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
A complex set of circumstances might ... m-i-g-h-t ... bring someone to have this 'groundhog day' type deliberation of a remembered event.
I have such a weird memory as a consequence of a motor accident when I was a young man, that I would find it hard to do what you are doing... if this poem is autobiographical?
Allen
2022-08-07


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
This is an interesting situation. You've returned to the scenes of many of your most memorable moments. As a result, you keep reliving them. You probably need to generate new memorable moments, if you can.
2022-08-06


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
You have the gift of putting complex emotional or personal concepts into images that are graspable, it is a gift of seeing clearly and relating what you see.

This poem is a bit nightmarish in that what might be a series of fond nostalgic moments leave you feeling hollow. No way out, sort of feeling. I hope that passes.
2022-08-06