Good things take time

Craving takes time
it takes time to rise
it takes time for you to realise
and it just lies there
in the inside of you
it could be ambushed
by work or over work
but its brave and resilient
and tender and soft
for it just stays to
one side of you
and waits
and not just waits
passively but aniticipates
moving you towards
beyond you
to bigger things
towards all.

i woke up with
that kind of craving
for you inside me.

Poetry by Sona The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2023-10-28 at 07:21

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I love how you write about love.

But for me, craving has never taken much time. I crave all the time.

Now yearning. Yearning takes time.

Tell me, do you yearn?

one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
"Craving" is such an interesting word, to the left of yearning and to the right of lust. It's just right, you use it in such a unique and loving way.


Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
Very nice, Sona. I love some of your rhymes in this, and the idea, the concept, is quite novel I feel. Blessings, Allen

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