Tanka (revised)

The Japanese rake
Sand to mimic ocean waves.
They revere tea pots.
Similarly, they want verse 
Contorted into mannered forms

Poetry by Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2023-11-18 at 17:00

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What did you change? Still awesome either way