Trouble

I get into trouble
When I forget the subtle
It doesn’t usually happens
But still it does sometimes
When I get into the immediacy
of here and now
Than the
Sublime terrain of
Always and forever.





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Written on 2023-11-25 at 16:17

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MetaPoetics The PoetBay support member heart!
I quite like "the / Sublime terrain of / Always and forever." It's sonically and imagistically pleasing. Well done!
2023-11-26


Sameen
Hmm a bit of a new from you. I like how “stuck” this poem is. Good job
2023-11-25