Moon ray

The moon, touches me

With it's immaculate ray

Now I feel at peace



Haiku by Teala
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Written on 2006-07-05 at 09:41

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Mirage
Just beautiful!
Yes, the moon is ever immaculate!
2006-07-08


Malin Johansson
Peacefull and imagery in this haiku!!!
good!! regards
2006-07-06


Kathy Lockhart
another beautiful haiku, Teala. It took my breath away. Now I a breathing again. wow! :) xx kathy
2006-07-06


Lourdes
yes , there is peace in the aura of this poem.
beautiful.
2006-07-05


Arti
Peace! moonbeams... immaculate n quiet.
Lovely write.
2006-07-05


Sandy Hiss
This is really pretty. There's a sense of tranquility here.
2006-07-05


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
now I feel at peace

waiting for the sunrise

a new day will come
2006-07-05



The moon living us everynight and for each ray we have felt the same effect calmness....lovely poem here indeed!!!kissess
2006-07-05