Inspired by a poem by Edna St Millay - Bluebeard; it plays with the idea of personal autonomy; as, do we or should we share all of ourselves with another?


Sonnet in Silence

They had walked along the beach in silence,
When she, taking his silence as separation
Had asked him what he was now thinking, as
Though his thoughts to himself did not belong,
But as much to her, so he might as well
Surrender with grace without an appeal
To an inner privacy he’d not shared;
So, what was thought could also be heard,
By becoming less his own and more hers.
And was that his fear – of being conjoined
More than in body but as much in mind,
When being himself was what he thought?
All this passed through his mind so fast that
As he looked at her he felt himself caught.


D G Moody 2025




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Written on 2025-01-09 at 15:52

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D G Moody The PoetBay support member heart!
Thanks Allen and Rik for your comments. I've revised the poem as I wasn't happy with the first draft.

Best.......Dougie
2025-01-16


Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
Sorry, repeated
2025-01-11


Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
Very thought provoking piece, this, and I can fully feel the inner 'turmoil' of having his thoughts questioned. He has two choices: Maintain his seclusion, or tell her a lie. Would either course be the right one? Great work.

Blessings, Allen
2025-01-11


arquious The PoetBay support member heart!
Happens to me quite often, really!
2025-01-10