discordant

 

steady tread of a lone coyote

along the shoreline   purposeful

 

a winter's day   

almost silent   barest of breeze

whispers

through bare branches

 

thoughts abound

cold seeps through gloves

and hat and boots

jacket and vest and woolen shirt

 

thoughts ill-suited to this winter scene

but there nonetheless

discordant   unnatural   of the wider world

beyond this pond and these woods

 

all is not well   and i wonder if i am well

if so   why these dark thoughts

 

 

 

 





Poetry by jim The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2026-02-21 at 15:05

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William Hughes The PoetBay support member heart!
I especially like the extra spaces you use between some of the phrases: after the coyote's tread, the extended space before purposeful is very effective. The chill of winter reflects the wintry emotion and thoughts. It's been my experience that these dark feelings come and go. Everything is waves.
2026-02-21