from 2017, edited 

 

for shells

 




On Miller's Pond (2)

 

 

Hawthorne, old Emerson, Henry and I 

Spent last Sunday, after church, skating,

Taking the air, stretching our limbs.

Thoreau, being the sport that he is, showed off 

His skill—pirouetting and leaping, long arms 

Windmilling. Waldo, bent at the waist, 

Cut a fine figure, but cautious, befitting his age, 

While Nathaniel and I circled the pond 

In pleasant repartee, a flask set by a convenient 

Snowbank comforted us from the chill, 

A bit of spirit spreads a satisfactory glow 

Throughout the bones and down to the toes. 

Melville came late, a most welcome presence,

And with little white puffs from his pipe 

Joined in the fun. A handsome group, we, 

I’ll allow, on the clear ice, in the midst of the hills, 

In the lee of the pines, low sun cutting shadows, 

A nip in the air, and the craic was good. 

 

 





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Written on 2026-03-08 at 15:07

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Albert Vynckier The PoetBay support member heart!
j'ai du bon tabac de la tabetière
j'ai du bon tabac et tu n'en auras pas !
2026-03-09


William Hughes The PoetBay support member heart!
A skating party with the great 19th century American intellectuals. How I would have liked to have been there. But as a spectator, since I have never been much of a skater, roller or ice. Original and well composed poem.
2026-03-09


shells
Thank you, I love this piece, the visuals it conjures, the warmth, the cold, spirit and satisfactory glow. I am happy with a mention of a pipe, ( my father smoked one, not many do now.) A snapshot of one of life’s perfect days. The craic as I understand an Irish term for fun, befits the entire poem.
2026-03-08