Blinkers

- How are We Feeling Today?

-Great!Couldn't be better!
Thanks for asking!
*big smile*
(((I am feeling dead inside. ... H E L P M E!!!)))

- I am glad for you!
Haven't seen you around
for ages!

- I 've been busy...
(((ask me.....please ask me...I need someone to talk to...I 've been depressed for months now, my dog died, my boyfriend left me with my best friend...)))

- As we all are*laughter*
(((Oh my God!why is she staring at me???I have to buy a new concealer next time; she can see the bruise around my eye!!!I wish I could dump him and live my life!but where can I go?I have no one to turn to...I AM
A L O N E...)))

- We should meet one day and catch up....

- Yes! That's an excellent idea!
I 'll call you...

[The next morning Joan commits suicide and Kate's body is found in the river, where her boyfriend dumped her body like trash...]

Blinkers

We all wear them...

Let's take them off

In a parallel universe Kate calls Joan 2 months earlier and after a long conversation Joan offers Kate a place to live untill she finds a better a place and convince her to go to the police, Kate's company helps Joan return to life....

Blinkers
We all wear them...
When are we going to take them off?



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Written on 2006-08-03 at 19:32

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Teala
Ah yes, what we say and what we really mean, I have to put on a fascade of happiness often!
2006-08-04



well!!!I have nothing to say but great poetry again...take care!!!!kissess
2006-08-04


Malin Johansson
APPLAUSE !!!
TAKE THE FU***** BLINDFOLDERS OFF!!!
They are no good, they only causes the troubles to get bigger or unspoken...
I think it's the pride inside us that force us to say I'm fine when we arent, because we want to be and look so strong and happy, but come on, who are we fooling, we are only lying and fooling ourselves...
So BLINDFOLDERS OFF NOW!!!
A great write here, you are so wise my dear friend...
Hugs from Göteborg:))
2006-08-03


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
fear of worrying and bringing feelings of helplessness to loved ones are mainly my reasons for not saying anything right out - not wanting to be a burden with my stuff... aside the fact i feel completely stupid... so i guess that's the pride part that's been mentioned in previous comments... but i think you're right... letting each other know how we are really would greatly help to eliminate or soften the many situations which could be avoided - though i feel that, still find it difficult to do... a very good text night... as always you bring up good topics that touch us all whether personally or through others around us going through stuff... i like the "façade" answers juxtaposed with the "silent true" answers... put me in a context i could recognize.. and presenting them this way was effective to create impact of reality... you got my thoughts going again ;)... this is great... thanks for sharing :f

*hug* xx
2006-08-03


Arti
Pride.. is it just pride or is it something more that makes one wear blindfolds? Like fear? Or the need to keep up an image of a Van Gogh Sunflower??? Wonder... Questions...
2006-08-03


Will
A lot of Wisdom and truth in this piece, are blindfolds usually consist of us being self consumed with our problems I'm guilty of this myself.
Tremendously enlightening Write!!!!
2006-08-03