camping

the darkness builds walls
around the fire, the smoke
slips through the ceiling



Haiku by pettyodd
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Written on 2006-08-05 at 15:46

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kladdpapper
interesting.

it's true. the walls protect the firey (if that's a word) feelings inside. but the feelings show to the outside somehow. but maybe not always as the fire they are, but more as the faded and manipulated expression the wall turns them into.

again, I like your poems.
2006-11-11


Teala
I love this, I almost smelled a campfire!
2006-08-06