There is a person I see out walking a lot around town, they are quite strange, and don't look like they are "all there".


Icy Stare

I feel the blank stare

Icy chills run down my back

A hollow person



Haiku by Teala
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Written on 2006-08-08 at 10:45

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Cris
This lyrics gave me shivers... uuhh..
small and very good!!
2006-08-14


Troll
here's another fear... being one of those people... hollow... or even just appearing to be hollow when i'm so lost inside my head... another awesome write...
2006-08-11


Will
think we all know someone like that...
Nicely put.
2006-08-08


Kathy Lockhart
ooooooooh, this gets to the heart of it all. You have created that feeling you describe and it ran down my spine as well. Well done. :) kathy
2006-08-08


Zachary P. B.
A hollow person...

No life, no love, no history... Just hollow.

Oh to be alive and poetic. Thankful am I.

Cheers to a wonderful thoughtful haiku friend!

z
2006-08-08


rider
There are some people who have no soul to their eyes, who are hard to understand because the eyes do not laugh... It reads as if your intuition could not read any sense to this hollow person...A good read this, almost a horror story from the beginning...Ron.
2006-08-08