Till my heartaches end....

I cannot measure the highway where I walk like a slave

You left me with nothing and full of pain

I am bluer than blue like thunder when it's rain

Your word of promises going nowhere
Like glass, it easily broke

I throw the diamond ring with your broken word of promises
I'll burn them with so much anger

Until they become dust and only the last word would remain
....Forgiveness

I feel so small every time I remember those careless words
when you're shouting me

How can I blame you for the love does not true?

I gave all my love to you without hesitation
But I discovered this love I gave is not enough

You always telling me "I love you"
Without hesitating
Without meaning
Without feelings


I always chew your unsweetened words and taste the forgotten
Love that you gave

I can't deny the truth that I'm still hurting

But I should teach myself to move on

and learn to right all my wrongs

....Till my heartaches end





Poetry by haseen whel
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Written on 2006-08-11 at 10:15

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Zachary P. B.
You always telling me "I love you"
Without hesitating
Without meaning
Without feelings
Words provoking a lie

love is such a question and a paradox... so confusing... ?

i hope your heart doesn't ache any longer. =)

z
2006-08-11


wee2souls
a very stong written poem here
love these lines

"How can I blame you for the love
does not true"

"I gave all my love without
hesitation but I discovered
this love I gave is not enough"

very powerful every word here!
love this write
hugs
cindy
2006-08-11


Will
There it is Heartfelt, painfilled and powerful

Tremendous Write
2006-08-11


Malin Johansson
Beautiful and heartbreaking...
Heartache is not a funny thing...
heartache hurts so much that you dont know where to go and what to do, even if you know deep inside that it wasnt you who broke it...then heartache still remains...
A good poem here Haseen!!!
Hugs to you dear
2006-08-11


Troll
"chew your unsweetened words"... harsh, intense writing... you made me feel it... well done :)
2006-08-11