Im from Sweden, so sorry if my English sucks.


Picture of my life




Only you
can make my day

your perfect smile
and your kindness

The sun is
nothing compared
to you

bittersweet
memories




Poetry by Camillaa
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Written on 2006-09-17 at 08:50

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Coolaaron88
Whats makes the poem very good is your summing up of a huge issue in so few words. I give you applause and I welcome you to the bay. Also your english is oustanding. Keep it up my friend.

~Aaron Rowe
2006-09-17


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Carmillia this is sweet and beautiful and all the other accolades I mention and youe poetry is welcome bhere on the bay

and because
you are a romantic poet i applaud your skill to say so much in so few words

your English is perfect i am English and mine also sucks

Just keep writing and believe me if that guy cant see what he has missed then it his loss
well done
wlecone to the bay.
2006-09-17


Zoya Zaidi
Short sweet poem,
To the point and expresses all.

WELCOME TO THE BAY!

And yes, Enbglish is perfect there!

love, Zoya
2006-09-17