The safety of a thunderstorm


Whispering their warning
Leaves betray
Tentative drops of water

The air changes season
Waves softly wake me
No longer alone

So happy
Lightning shrieks
And thunder roars






Poetry by efflux
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Written on 2006-09-17 at 21:25

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anguisette
you say things with as little words as possible, and i love that, because it gives the whole poem a much deeper impact.. (i like to write that way, too..)
2006-09-24


Zoya Zaidi
The storm breaks up,
The leaves tremble,
I curl up on the hearth with you...

Full of rich images...

WELCOME TO THE BAY FROM MY SIDE.

love,
Zoya
2006-09-17


Xuxa
OOoooOOOoOoo, a powerful write. Very simple yet very complex. Excellent work! =)
2006-09-17