free haiku sequence on hibiscus


HIBISCUS: A HAIKU SEQUENCE

Love tickles
with erect pistil:
hibiscus


0leander and
hibiscus blaze with passion--
making love in sun


Suspended
on the spider's web--
a hibiscus


A tiny spider
on the hibiscus sucking
its golden hue


Narrowly escape
the midair web of spider
perched on hibiscus


The lone hibiscus
waits for the sun to bloom:
morning's first offering


Red oleander and
hibiscus calling morning
to Kali


Without washing hands
he touches hibiscus for worship:
her frowning glance


After little rain
lilies smile with hibiscus--
the sun in May


Too short
can't reach the height:
hibiscus






Haiku by R.K.Singh
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Written on 2005-06-08 at 06:14

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LurieJune
BEAUTIFUL!!!!I could smell the flowers as i read!!!!
2005-07-08


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
perhaps i spoke too soon with my last comment :) nice work, enjoyed the flow here.
2005-06-23



An enjoyable sequence which communicates to the reader warmth, light, colours, smells and feeling. Thank you!
2005-06-08