As Poets

All we are looking for
Is to strike a chord
In another's soul

Have you heard this song?
Are its notes etched
Within your being?

Do you hear the sweetness
Of the melody?
And did you feel

Harmony's vibrations
Rock you to your core?

Poetry by StillHoppin The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2005-09-25 at 20:43

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ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Has a poet
I write/type
To express
What is me
That lays
With in me
Ken D

Rob Graber
I love music even more than poetry, but I can only play it (on classical guitar), not compose it. I love harmony--it's the biggest thing for me. This is a WONDERFUL write!

Yes. And that's why I'm addicted. :P

Zoya Zaidi
When you strike a cord,
In another's heart,
Your job as a poet
Is done!
For poetry is
All about communicating
From heart to heart!

That surely is a lovely write!
I am impressed!

Sofiul Azam
Yes, the very starting of the poem with lines like
"All we are looking for
Is to strike a chord
In another's soul"
is fantastic, for your creativity fuels the engine of such emotion, and the end:
"Harmony's vibrations
Rock you to your core?"

It's so insightful that no reader has any problem to dive down into the depth of a poet's mind. Well-done!

Yes stillHoppin, I feel the haromony's vibrations. You sound a true poet.

It is a good feeling to know that you have touched someone with a song, poem, smile...this poem touched me!

Lovely emotional poetry, giving literal and fresh meaning to phrases like "your words are like music to my soul". True, a well-written poem should have a kind of musical flow in the lines. Delicately worded, and a pleasure to read and re-read!
Also, hi I'm back now, but with an OLD poem this time instead of a new one. I'd love to have your comment on it, since I greatly appreciated what you said about my two earlier pieces!
2005-10-10 Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
:D youre so damn good! :) as poets... (and diary writers? ;) ) we can definitely identify to this... you say it exactly how it is... no two ways about this one :)

*mmwhua* - right on the forehead this time hehe ;)

*hugs* xx

you captured being a poet so well there. poetry is in the soul.

chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
i felt something, i'm pretty sure it was furry though lol looks around for spiders :o

"And did you feel
Harmony's vibrations
Rock you to your core?"
This is beautiful, it really is!

Commentally Ill
oh, it rocked me to my core, baby!