Godess of bronze

Fall and her colours,
sun's yellowish light
hard to appreciate,
something's blurring my sight

A godess of bronze
asleep by my side
in bed she's my lover,
in life she's my guide

the blur dissapears
a thought comes to me
this is just a memory
my past,
but also future to be

Poetry by Marcus
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Written on 2005-09-29 at 18:17

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I love this time of year, so many warm colours.
Enjoyed reading your poem, a very good piece of work!

chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
godess - goddess
dissapears - disappears

a good piece, autumn and love entwined, rolling on each other.

John Ashleigh
Touching. I did really enjoy reading this, and it finishes so instantly that it gives me that edge of knowing that it was something near love at first sight. Am I right in saying you're staying together for life, in either marriage or love?

I think I understand this poem, it is well written and I love how you dont give us all the answers, it makes my brain juice try and find the answers and makes its own atmosphere. Brilliant.