from my book i have written. hope you enjoy it!


Across a small space and back

Across a small space and back,
notta long way.
my cardboard spaceship to take me,
spaghettie bowl helmet to protect thee.
my dog spot,
sits at co-captian.
across a small space and back
the sights i will see
the big dipper
venus and mars
never this close
all this
and much much more
across a small space and back
my heat shield is pulled off
like the bed sheet it is
when i look up
to see the bright lights of stars
i see my mother
plain and tall
time for dinner
i can continue my trip tomarrow
across a small space and back




Poetry by Valerie
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Written on 2006-10-20 at 16:45

Tags Adventure  Children  Space 

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Jessica Rexroat
spaceships and tents and dressing up your dog, your imagination is beautiful and full, and I hope you always keep it, and I will always encourage it. - Love you, mommy
2006-10-21


Phyllis J. Rhodes
This is another great story!
2006-10-20



Hi Valerie!
Welcome to the bay!
The Alien one loved this delightful space fantasy!
2006-10-20


Lourdes
what an amazing trip ! Thanks for bringing us along with you ! Great write , Valerie . I can see how talent with words runs in your family !!
2006-10-20


Kathy Lockhart
hold on to that box Valerie. It takes you fantastic places. xoxoxo
2006-10-20