circle of life

Once again I fall
Is there ever an end to it all?

the life that I loath
an eon on the road

with nothing there to ease
will I ever find my peace

When I last catch ground
what I seek for can't be found

washed down by a stream
so fast it made me scream

But then I hit a lake,
for a second, here's my break

but warmed up by the sun,
again, it has begun

cooled down by higher air
stuck in lifes despair

to fall again, anew
the short time that I flew

at first the sky was clear
for once I had no fear

But land made me a cloud
Thunder striking loud

Flashing lightning sings
the new circle now begins

never will it stop
when you are just a drop


a drop of water





Poetry by Marcus
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Written on 2005-10-01 at 03:53

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Teala
wow--wonderful poetry--i love it!
2005-10-13


John Ashleigh
The circle of life - moralled by the water cycle.

Absolutely brilliant! 5!
2005-10-01


Commentally Ill
i like it very much, but the constant rhyme took away from it for me. felt like i was reading a much more serious, depressed dr. seuss. at least you could've thrown in some nonsensical words.
2005-10-01


Ray
You are truly inspired... keep up the good work.
2005-10-01