The first time I laid eyes on you,
I Knew i had fallen in love.
And you smiled,
because you knew it.

Poetry by Valerie
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Written on 2006-11-12 at 20:24

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nice very nice. enjoyable poetry. in just four lines you told everything. very well.

Jessica Rexroat
clever, clever. your writing is sharp and so beautiful.

Phyllis J. Rhodes
This is just about perfect. You are just about perfect!
Write and write and write. You are a writer!

Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
Love it. You say so much Valerie in so few words.