Smile

The first time I laid eyes on you,
I Knew i had fallen in love.
And you smiled,
because you knew it.



Poetry by Valerie
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Written on 2006-11-12 at 20:24

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amandeep
nice very nice. enjoyable poetry. in just four lines you told everything. very well.
2007-06-12


Jessica Rexroat
clever, clever. your writing is sharp and so beautiful.
2006-11-22


Phyllis J. Rhodes
This is just about perfect. You are just about perfect!
Write and write and write. You are a writer!
2006-11-14


Kathy Lockhart
Love it. You say so much Valerie in so few words.
2006-11-13